Wednesday, 17 June 2015

Comic 16: Bum Deal

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Comic 16 is here, baby!!! 52 pages, each one of them a rare and high-quality treat, I'm sure you'll agree :D

Well, I mean... see what you think. I like this one though, it's better than the last stupid one in that shower; that was stupid. Well, they're all fairly stupid, but you know, sexy high-jinx in space is always worth a read either way.

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29 comments:

Ixes said...

Yay!!

So... Close... To getting... Everyone naked...

Ascienne said...

Very nice, and Becky as always just my favourite. Thnaks PB.

Ix and Xho - the neverending story :) Reminds me of the series 'Project Sex House', in which the girl Karie would love to have a nice cream-pie - but nobody cums inside her, yet.

Anonymous said...

Finally! Thank you. Wonderful!
I found myself distracted from the nekkidness and sex stuff by the story... a little. Now I begin the next phase of waiting. Do they die? Tell me they don't die! They die, don't they?
So glad you've awakened! Can't wait for more. :-)

Sharpie said...

Great new entry in the series! Glad to see the story come back into play, and a killer cliffhanger! (Well, keeping my fingers crossed that it's not too killer.) The meta bit cracked me up, and the ladies are looking more lovely than ever. (And this is the first time I think I noticed that Becky and Tom have the same eyes. Man, am I slow to the game, or what?) Can't wait for the next part, but I'm a bit worried at the tease that it might be the last part to the saga. Seems like there's a whole lot of ground to cover to wrap things up (and fit in all the naughty bits). Or is it just the conclusion to one plotline? Regardless, I'm looking forward to it.

And thanks for the bit of nostalgia and bringing back memories. I too played Tomb Raider (and Tomb Raider 2) back in college, and I have fond memories of both games. (Sadly, they're about the only two PS1 disks that I can't get to work on my PS3.)

Project Bellerophon said...

Hint: I like Ix, it's unlikely I'd suffocate her, but it may take some emergency situation to get her and Xho together.... ...
Further hint: look on this blog around November 2014 if you want a couple of development renders for a scene I may be working towards. That's a huge spoiler though, so don't look if you want to maintain the sense of a cliffhanger!

Project Bellerophon said...

Glad you got the meta bit :)
I did go into having becky look at 'the camera' and go into who might be reading this comic, but it just didn't lead to a punchline and gave a bit of a bleak sense of futility! So I skipped back into the plot quickly haha.
There is a lot of ground to cover, but there's needed to be a plot-heavy one for a while, and it's not likely the next comic will be the last one ever, so I'll probably just wrap most things up and then the comic after that can be either celebratory smooching or them going after Fabuloso on a crusade.

^^ that sounds like spoilers, but considering how butterfly-minded I am, and how often I change the plot and even comic order mid-development, it'll change [following chaos theory] and therefore it's very difficult for even me to give spoilers!

Project Bellerophon said...

Haha I know, I nearly had Zan pop her head in just in order to have the whole team in one comic! I think Pegasus' Wraith is the only one with everyone in it so far. Maybe I should do a cameo comic, where literally every character is included somehow... it could start with Tom dreaming about Tinkerbell, then have Luce looking at old photos of powergirl or something (random Pilot Plaything reference #308...)

Project Bellerophon said...

Thanks, yeah I'm enjoying the build-up. Hope they don't die before sorting it out O_O

Sharpie said...

It's not difficult to see (and give spoilers) because of chaos theory, but rather because, "Always in motion is the future."

Ixes said...

Ew, no spymaster, plzkthxbye.

Or John McCain

Anonymous said...

Now that you've mentioned it you have to do a bit with Tink and Ix (in Tacspace?) at the same time.

Anonymous said...

I like Ix too (a lot) and saw those development renders of which you speak! Very hopeful that development develops! But I wouldn't want to jinx it so I shan't speak of how much I'd like that.

Tittily Winks said...

AHW yeah! Heha! Woo. Frelling brilliant. This may be the first bum deal I've ever ah, enjoyed. Not that I ah... well, let's say I don't mean enjoy like Tom did but. Butt? Well. Nevermind. Anyway! First, I've got to say, this issue is a fine example as ever of the *unique* qualities your comics have.

Xho sure comes into his own here (wait... that's yet to happen, I mean figuratively!) too and he is just the cutest thing since ever, one panel really nailed it ah lemme see [ages pass as TW ends up re-absorbed in it, munching some almonds and staring with child-bright, faery-wicked eyes] oh ah, top of page 22. And 25 (this is supposed to be fun, don't make me choose). No wonder Ix is gaga over him (not that she's going to do crazy videos and go to plays dressed in pork chop, but y'know).

Delightful Bex & Tom too, Tom being such a competent, with-it commander and all and their interplay (hey, and folks, Tom & Bex take 'interplay' to places you won't find elsewhere, except perhaps in the same crew when/if Ix & Xho have at it). Love how he's "Hey! I'm still hard, let's go again!" and Bex's attitude is all, "that's a good boy."

And yeah, I got the joke. Bad pun. Very bad. And yet, so good. It's all good. *Chiana-esque nod. Bravo!

Project Bellerophon said...

Yeah tink and Ix would be cool.

But yeah, no John McCain!

Project Bellerophon said...

Hey TW great to see you're still around! Glad you like it, I'll take 'unique' as a compliment haha :D

Dan said...

Dude! Yes! The friendly banter is superb! The hot hotness is hot! I'll defend Fap Club and say that it's better than you seem to suggest, however this is better. Thank you so much for making / sharing this. Oh, and nice cliffhanger ending! At least no one was vomiting green bile this time. ; ) Keep up the great work.

Dan said...

And yes, everyone would love to see TinkerBex again. I'm confident enough of that to speak for all. : )

hzr said...

Nice to see you are still around babe :)

Keep on rockin!

Anonymous said...

I all kinds of vote for more TinkerBex! Yes, please.

Project Bellerophon said...

Ha, I get one 'dude' (above), and one 'babe'! Glad to hear my gender remains a largely irrelevant and open-to-debate mystery! Jolly good fun, this internetting, eh?!

Thanks for the message, I will indeed :)

Project Bellerophon said...

Dan - glad you like Fap Club, I did too to be honest, but you know what it's like with work you've done in the past; easy to be critical when the hard work's long behind you! And yeah, no green puke in sight :D

That puke ending came about because that comic had dragged on for too long and I totally gave up on the idea of the comic and just wanted to finish it as fast as possible so killed everyone - always the fastest way to end a plot haha!!

I guess by TinkerBex you guys mean Tinkerbell and Ix?? Rather than Tinkerbell and Bex (as in Becky)..? I've been pondering ways to bring Tink back -any combination with the crew would work tbh, it's just a case of waiting til the plot dies down a bit before we bring her back :)

Project Bellerophon said...

(glad you like Xho, by the way; he's a slow-burner, that one; he's slowly getting over his prudish intro as he learns the way of ... well, not the Force, but ... I guess Zan and Becky are teaching him a gosh-darned thing or two..)

Dan said...

Sorry, should have been more clear. Yes, Becky as Tinkerbell. Damn yeah. But you make a great point saying that any of the crew as a naughty fairy character would work.
Yeah, I totally know what it's usually like with past work. So we out here will remind you that you do basically awesome work and thank you for it as much as we can.
I always suspected something like that for the green vomit ending. I'm pleased you changed your mind. Also the creative solution you found to write yourself out of that corner is very cool.
Anyhow... Thanks and Cheers!

Tittily Winks said...

Yes and most blokes need to learn a gosh-darned thing or two thousand. :) He's a gem isn't he.

Unique's a compliment but definitely. You've your own style and it's invaluable considering the paucity of anything sexy that isn't trading on the conventions, thug mentalities/'culture', rape, hentai tropes etc. I also like that you don't forget it's a comic, it's more effective for the comics angles you use. Won't name, but one of the best I've seen at poser stuff was wondering recently why their quality is up but views/favs are down and IMH one of the reasons is that the poser models are too "real" in ways that don't excite the imagination as their less realistic models did. Your characters haven't lost any of their fun and exciting styles as the tech/rendering has improved.

So I took another leer er, re-read of 'Fap club' (fap's what Xho had in his mind and boy, club is what he had in his hand) and maybe I'm just bein' hokey or something, but... sure, 'Bum Deal' is a lot stronger but I thought 'Fap club' delightful in many respects on its own terms. Just the play of proximity and contact 'tween the two SO turned on characters was sexy and that was just fer starters.

About all I can say critical-wise is that your posing expressions are so good the captions may sometimes be extraneous (say, "I want him in me" while the scenario/postures say it fine or even better).

Project Bellerophon said...

No worries, and glad you like the nonsense I come up with! Re Tinkerbex, it's more likely I bring in another character rather than turn an existing one into a tiny fairy - I've a few ideas but I need to kill some characters off first, it's getting a bit crowded in there...

Project Bellerophon said...

Hey, you won't jinx it. It'll go there no doubt, but it won't be the ultimate ... penetrative 'coming together' of the twins; that I'll save for another day I think :)

Project Bellerophon said...

Gotta love some Yoda. Decide I must. Tits I like.
Oh man, maybe I should do an entire comic where they get their brains messed with due to an ionised gas attack from Fabuloso or something and speak like Yoda they do. Great that would be.

Project Bellerophon said...

Thanks dude. Glad that lots of people get that I'm not aiming for the 'cream pie' thug approach to sex. That whole mentality just speaks of an adolescent vision of sex to me; like people don't know how awesome it can be, they just want to own and degrade and overpower. I mean a bit of spanking every now and then; fine, but that whole rape culture I just find really damaging, even if it is packaged as mere fantasy.

Anyway, yes; I shouldn't be too harsh on Fap Club, you're right to defend it so thank you. I tend to err towards self-deprecation and it's easier to mock your former self than your current one! Think I rushed through Fap Club because I wanted to get onto what I knew I'd enjoy creating; Bum Deal (just because I love the lighting in that little bunk - so much I couldn't help but have Xho imagining himself and Ix in there for a few shots in Fap Club), and the one I'm 'working on' now - the total fiasco, totally all-over-the-shop plot injection and awkward rub-a-dub scenario between Ix and Xho.

Well, that's the plan at least, I'll probably think of one or two intermediate comics I need to fit in first, and rush through those as well, spelling out the "I want him in me" stuff rather than taking my time and letting the intimacy say it.

Ah, fun to chat, all first-world-storytelling problems eh.
What you working on at the mo? Got your muse back? Email me some links :)

Project Bellerophon said...

I've changed my mind on that one; think if I brought a tiny fairy character in it could be Becky or Ix shrink-ified.. anyway, just pondering out loud.