Read it slowly. SLOWLY.
Don't rush through it, you'll miss the point. Slowly, seriously: trust me on this. Download Comic #15 →
Or from G.E-Hentai here
And let me know what you think!
Friday 1 May 2015
Comic 15: Fap Club
Read it slowly. SLOWLY.
Don't rush through it, you'll miss the point. Slowly, seriously: trust me on this. Download Comic #15 →
Or from G.E-Hentai here
And let me know what you think!
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Thanks Bellerophone, a very good story - but a gloomy one as well. Will Xho ever manage to betreated by Ix like all personnel ? I have high hopes.
I just have one small complaint: In my downloaded pics the texts are all very blurry (I hope this is the correct word). I have real problems in reading the text. The pics are clear, but ....
Nevertheless, I just love all pics - especially no. 35 :), when it clicks.
Weird it comes out blurry - I've put the pages on http://bit.ly/1bMAZ5b as well - check them there they shouldn't be blurry, maybe it's what you're using to view the jpegs?
I just love how you are developping the plot.
The art too!
The use of high key lighting in the shower is very elegant and shows how strong the fantasy (in normal lighting) is.
The characters Xho and Ix - and the theme - reminded me of a "Jessie" in a comic "Upstairs". Isn't that one of your comics too?
Thanks - I wasn't sure about the lighting to be honest, that's why I weaved in scenes from the little bunk room, and the spaceship corridor - without those I think the comic would've been a bit weak.
And yeah, Upstairs was one of mine, it's something I later edited to fit in with the scifi running plot and forms the main part of comic #7 - Daydreaming :)
First of May! First of May! Brand new comic out today!
Thanks Project Bellerophon, the link works marvellous and I could appreciate your story even more. Initially I downloaded your pics with the Google-machine, which was a big mistake, but now I can see clearly.
btw, did you ever read lastone's little story 'It's only incest, if...' ? (http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/lastone/The%20Family%20Values%20Files/It%27s%20Only%20Incest%20if.....txt)
Glad you can see it clearly now :)
Hey I liked that story, but just when I was getting into it, it made me laugh which kinda ruined it >> "They both knew he was entirely inside her body when they felt his ball bag full of potent baby seed resting against her pooper." - hahaha! I mean seriously! :D
Enjoyed some of the others to :)
It's free comic day! Woop woop woooop!!
'Resting against her pooper' - He was on top of his sis and he just had abnormally enormous balls, or had he ?
By the way, 'Upstairs' was the first of your comics I thoroughly enjoyed, but in 'Daydreaming' Mike became Tom, and Jessie became Becky. Major Tom I understand, but why Becky instead of Jessie ?
Now that you've made me think about it, all I can see is a Tom Sawyer reference. Even if Belle comes back with the real reason, it'll always be Mark Twain in my head.
Well played, Bellerophon. Well played.
Real reason is more boring i'm afraid! I'd done the Tom and Becky characters (in Space Trek Fleet Wars, which was my first ever comic of any sort) before I came up with Mike and Jessie. Then when I wanted to make Upstairs a part of the Space Trek series, I just changed the names of the characters to fit. No references, no cleverness, just a bunch of names I liked for the characters and swapped around :)
I just looked at page no.14 and as I can see clearly now, I now got the message - and I cannot help, but laugh aloud. Your play with words, so that Xho in the end admitted his desire to fuck his sister - hilarious.
By the way, Ix seems to be a msot cherished character. But, although I like her a lot, for me Becky is and stays no. ONE since I met her upstairs :) How about a vote ??
Just in case a voting could/would be an idea, we have five girls to pick from:
Becky (who gets 10 out of 10 from me), Zan (8 of 10), Lucy (who left the crew way-back-when and calls herself Luce now !! and will hopefully join them all again in the not too distant future) (9 of 10), Ix (9.5 of 10) and Hayley (9 of 10).
Fap Club is WONDERFUL. That playful banter gets me every time and you did it so well! Thank you for everything. I hope you enjoy it enough to continue on but can understand when it becomes work rather than fun. Anyhoo, thank you.
Yeah it'd be funny to do a poll on the crew! I don't think Ix will be happy with getting 9.5 out of 10 though, you might end up with a few new bruises :)
Thanks Dan, glad you like it.
Okay, I gotta admit that Becky was really hot in a fantastically comforting way. She was really disarming and made Xho feel so much more comfortable sexually, even after being caught masturbating. It really made Becky stand out and seem awesomely sexy. Also, I know I'm late to the party on this, but I just realized that in Blue Steel, page 7, Zan was talking about Oola from Star Wars: Return of the Jedi, right before she died. It was a delightful yet melancholy reminder of that character and I'm impressed you worked that in to the story. Good job.
Hey thanks Anon. And well spotted on the reference to Oola - I guess I try & weave a bit of referential stuff in occasionally, more for my own fun than the expectation that anyone spots it!
Glad you like Becky, it hadn't occurred to me that was part of her allure; putting Xho's mind to rest, I think when I come up with the plots and script I just think through how I would play it, how real conversations happen and try to make the sexiness happen the way it does in real life; you know a bit of disarming, a bit of intimacy, a little quiet togetherness here and there :)
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